Friday, 2 August 2019

Bella the ladybug

AO Integrate sources of information, processes, and strategies with developing confidence to identify, form, and express ideas I am learning to include visual information in my writing including images, graphs and charts. I am learning to revise and rework my writing for clarity, impact and purpose. I am learning to support my main ideas with important details.

 Bella the ladybug

 Hi I am Bella the ladybug .I live in a bush all alone because all of my family has been Squished by big giant human. It was very sad to watch. So I decided to leave my destroyed village. On my adventure I saw a bunch of humans having lunch together. One of the humans came over to the bush where I was but he did not see me. That was good ! Then I went to get some food and it was very good. After that I met another ladybug and her name was Georgia. She was very nice so we became friends. After that we were at the forest. We came across a sleeping tiger so we had to be very quiet. Next we were at home. So I said that was a good adventure to Georgia. So Georgia said yeah it was. But this human came along and tried to squish us down but he didn’t get us so that was good but it was Scary . The end

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